Blog Entry 12: Readable Draft

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Intro:Jean Ferris has made Christian different from other normal children in her novel Once upon a Marigold. Being a child bought up by a troll made Christian different; in a way he saved the mind-reading Princess from her evil mother. Watching the royal family across the river with his newly invented telescope and sending pigeon mails (P-mails) to the princess was Christian’s only intentions until he crosses the river and decides to get a job in the castle just to see the odd, mind-reading Princess Marigold. Christian’s purpose was innocent until he found out the plot of Queen Olympia to overthrow King Swithbert and kill Marigold. Christian, as a Wanderer Archetype has to save the princess with his unusual hero’s quest in order to reunite several families, and reveal his true and forgotten identity. Christian's accomplishments are symbolic to adolescents in revealing their own true identity through the lonesome journey of adulthood.

Bio: As a natural writer, Jean Ferris kept a diary since the age of seven. Her talent of literature did not occur to her until one of her children's friend try to commit suicide which establish the novel Amen, Moses Gardenia (1983). "I had what I now realize was the perfect childhood for a writer" she says. She kept a diary of what she saw, heard and felt because of constant moving, thus the developing stories she write to herself. She attended Stanford University, got a B.A. and M.A. in Speech Pathology and Audiology but didn't enjoy her field of study. Her interest in English has never fade, as she kept piles of stories in her home until one day her publication began.(see jeanferris.com) According to Wikipedia, her awards includes: American Library Association Best Books for Young Adults, American Library Association Popular Paperbacks for Young Readers, American Library Association Quick Picks for Young Adults, IRA Young Adult Choices, NCSS-CBC Notable Trade Book in the Field of Social Studies, and California Young Reader Medal.

Wanderer:  Christian symbolizes great characteristics of a wanderer in the novel. As a boy, he escapes his original home as a Prince (which he later finds out) because of many rules he needs to follow. Wanderers hated rules that bound them from their freedom, but it is also a way to set them into their hero’s quest; to “find a treasure that symbolically represents the gift of their true selves.” (pg.65 Pearson). Also Christian doesn’t seem to be too concern about his family not able to find him, but about running away from the cage he was trapped in. Christian is bought up by a troll named Edric (Ed) in a cave, although he’s not “‘captive’ by a witch, ogre, dragon, or some other fearsome beast” (pg.67 Pearson), the place he lived and the way Ed raised him (very independently) made him a natural wanderer that trigger the start of his destine heroic quest to find “something bigger, something other.” (pg.34 Ferris). When the time comes for Christian to leave Ed, he doubts his decision while hiking up to the castle “whether he was making a horrible mistake, trading the dull-but-comfortable known for the scary, unpredictable unknown.” (pg.82 Ferris). Wanderers are likely to be scared of changes, of never going back, and of the unknown, but his craving for adventure surpasses his doubts and worries of the foreign path.

Departure: Christian's call to adventure might not be so clear in the beginning as he already started to run away from his real family to find foreign "treasure" or "land" that he later called home. Christian's departure actually started when the urge to communicate with the Princess across the river grew stronger as he grew older.  According to Campell "This fateful region of both treasure and danger may be variously represented: as a distant land, a forest, a kingdom underground, beneath the waves, or above the sky, a secret island, lofty mountaintop, or profound dream state" (wiki). Christian's fateful region became the castle across the river which lie his treasure, the heart of his beloved Princess Marigold and danger, the villainess Queen Olympia. At the age of 17, and being raised by a troll might contribute to the fact that he know nothing of love since he had not encounter a woman all his life. Christian's intentions might be just the love of Marigold, but he also possess the desire to achieve something greater, since he thinks “increasingly, the sense that he no longer fit so well where he was.” (pg. 34 Ferris). 

Crossing the first threshold: Christian crosses the threshold (a river between the castle and his cave) with a silver coin he found and kept for years (seems like he was prepared). When Christian arrive at the castle's gate, he had trouble with the gatekeeper. The guard named Rollo gave him a hard time going into the castle for his job, luckily Hayes Centaur, the king's game keeper helped him with the situation, but this lead to future complications between Christian and Rollo. Campell claim that crossing the first threshold can be "dangerous; to deal with them is risky; yet for anyone with competence and courage the danger fades." To Christian, crossing the threshold is dangerous, because of the unknown and the terror of facing a guard eight feet tall. Although he obtain help from someone, he was not going to give up even if Rollo did anything he threatened. (see pg.83 Ferris) 

Belly of the Whale:
Wanderers forget they are not alone most of the time, they have friends and support; in this case his family. When Christian was thrown in the dungeon with Ed, Bud and Cate (the two dogs), he exclaim to Marigold in their conversation “Sorry? I’m glad. They’re my family. I’ve missed them terribly.” (pg.167 Ferris). This stage that Christian encounter signifies a treasure that he has been looking for to represent his true self. Not only did he find a piece of belonging, but also a step towards the inner warrior (adult) he’s developing.

Initiation: "Once having traversed the threshold, the hero moves in a dream landscape of curiously fluid, ambiguous forms, where he must survive a succession of trials." Campell says. Christian's main quest are to save Marigold from Queen Olympia's evil deeds. His side quest would be to prevent Marigold's wedding to Sir Magnus, her distant relative. His third quest, a hidden quest was to find himself, as the future king of Zandelphia.

The Meeting with the Goddess:In Campell's words, "The meeting with the goddess (who is incarnate in every woman) is the final test of the talent of the hero to win the boon of love, which is life itself enjoyed as the encasement of eternity." In this stage, Marigold act as the Goddess in the story, very clearly because Christian's love for her caused him to abandon his independent life in the forest and become a servant just to see her. His love for her also risks his life getting shot by an arrow when he crashed on the flying contraction he build in the dungeon just to stop the wedding of Marigold and Sir Magnus.(pg.223-225 Ferris) All of the task mentioned above are fulfilled to win Marigold's love, thus becoming one of the boon he receives.

Apotheosis: "When someone dies a physical death, or dies to the self to live in spirit, he or she moves beyond the pairs of opposites to a state of divine knowledge, love, compassion and bliss. A more mundane way of looking at this step is that it is a period of rest, peace and fulfillment before the hero begins the return."(Wiki) When Christian got out of the dungeon using the flying contraption he build, the Queen ordered her guards to shoot Christian in order for her to continue with her plans. Christian got shot with a poison arrow which leaves him with death. Marigold then saves his life, giving up her fairy birth gift (the ability to read another's thoughts) and healing Christian's wound. After being saved by Marigold’s fairy birth gift, Christian enjoy a moment of reunion with Marigold to know that everything he needed was right where he is. "in the deepest part of himself, he knew this was what he'd been headed toward for as long as he could remember"(pg.245 Ferris)

 

The Ultimate Boon: "The ultimate boon is the achievement of the goal of the quest. It is what the person went on the journey to get."(Wiki) Christian's ultimate boon was to eliminate Olympia, which his two dogs gladly helped with. The two dogs, along with Marigold's three dogs forced Olympia over the terrace wall and into the river. No one ever found the trace of Olympia, except for her shoe. It gave peace and satisfactory throughout the kingdom. Nevertheless, Christian rebuild the cave across the river into his own kingdom of Zandelphia after finding out that he was the lost prince eleven years ago. "he'd been preparing for a life with Marigold--and for a life as a good king"(pg.245-246 Ferris)

The Crossing of the Return Threshold/Master of the Two Worlds:
Campell claims the master of the two worlds would be "Freedom to pass back and forth across the world division, from the perspective of the apparitions of time to that of the causal deep and back—not contaminating the principles of the one with those of the other, yet permitting the mind to know the one by virtue of the other—is the talent of the master. " After a year, Christian build a bridge over the river between King Swithbert's castle and his own castle (the cave) to make communicating more convenient, "linking our two kingdoms in friendship and commerce"(pg.263 Ferris). His invention of 'p-mail' has spread over the world that everybody seems to be using it. The rules that he and Marigold came up benefit every class in their kingdom.

 

Freedom to Live:
"This is sometimes referred to as living in the moment, neither anticipating the future nor regretting the past."(Wiki) Upon completing the set of quest and gaining the love of his life, Christian and Marigold are known to be the role model of all royalties. Living their day "watching the sunrise, eating vegetarian, wearing a single diamond earring, and using part of their residence as a home for unwanted children" (pg.265).